Case Study 3: The Rest of the West





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  1. Daniel, you have to improve on your introduction. You should explain why capitalism is better in your later body paragraphs. The examples of the countries you listed in your introduction are kind of irrelevant.

    Almost all of your points are based on your personal opinions. You should list facts from history to support that capitalism is better than socialism and how it improves economy.

    Also, you should focus your concluding sentences on CAPITALISM, not how economy can possibly destroy a country. Last but not least, contain more word variation! :))

    Overall, I really like your essay!

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  2. Thank you Allen for the grateful comments

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